This weekend I took some steps back from the Somewhat Related comic strip and looked a little deeper at what I’m trying to do. I really want to improve it and take it to the next level. So I looked at the overall quality, the story, and the characters.
First and foremost I re-inked the last comic. The old school Mac Hall thing was cool, but it doesn’t really fit me. It’s too thick and I really miss the dynamics of the line quality. The latest inked version should be posted by Tuesday at the latest. It’s all done, I just have to scan it and do some clean up. But getting that taken care made me feel worlds better.
The next thing I tackled, which was completely out of order, was the writing and development of the next story line. Although I was able to come up some decent material, it all seemed superficial. I couldn’t really put my finger on what made it surface level, but I knew something wasn’t to my liking. I know this comic is an evolving project, but I really want to take that next step and go beyond a yuk-yuk-yuk. I reviewed comics like For Better or Worse and Calvin and Hobbes for inspiration and guidance. What I found was that I didn’t really know my characters, which meant that my audience didn’t really know them either. How could I write stories without establishing the ground rules?
After some stewing I fired up the pilot episode of The Office to get an idea on how to introduce characters when they have never really been seen before. To my surprise I was overlooking the answer I was looking for. I really needed to simplify my characters in a few words and then place them into the situations. The stories should write themselves. After a few attempts it really seemed to be working, but this is really my first attempt so I’m sort of stumbling along the way.
As of right now I don’t have anything concrete, but you should expect some character building strips to follow the re-inked #17. From there I can better tell their story. I was forcing my characters to do things that they weren’t really meant to do. A rookie mistake, but I’m still learning and that’s part of what make this so awesome.